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Post by Clever on Aug 18, 2013 3:37:41 GMT
We have like...160 guests. I don't know if you guys are stalkers or like reading our rp's...but...please tell us!
By the way, if you are a stalker, we're not stupid enough to give away anything. Thanks for making the internet an untrustable place.
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Post by Huge 8itch on Aug 18, 2013 21:18:30 GMT
OKAY SO FIRST OFF- I'm not gonna join this rp because I prefer reading. I'm a piece of shit at writing but I love to analyze and such with reading so I'm gonna give you guys a lil critique. If you find me harsh ththen o o p s
So first off let's do characters
LUCY- I'm sorry diosma but she's so flat sometimes it hurts omg. Yes I get Jäger and Lucy can be cute yada yada but it's like she has no personality except for loving Jaggy and being angsty about loving him. Jeez I get you want her to be kind of hiding personality but gosh can we have a bit more?? She's always needing saving from random plot movers and is just goshdarned wimpy. Ugh it's like I'm jumping up and down at the screen screaming to get back to the plot!! She has amazing potential to be an a+ character but if you're not going to do the secretely badass card right then just don't try doing it at all. Maybe it's back to the drawing board
JÄGER- You keep going on about how badass he is but sheesh why doesn't he ever show it (save for random plot movers??) I mean each fight is like two posts with him get a lil more action in bro I actually have no more critique on him other then being more nightmarish?? Idk Just lay off a little on the JägLuce thing because I honestly think that you rp them so much that everyone's drowned under all these posts and it's dragging the rp down. Maybe develop the romance better?? It's just really cheesy and no one else is rping anymore because of all of it
WICKED- I actually really like her uvu she's awesome and creative- but the thing is is that I don't think she's ever interacted with Warren??¿? Y'know he exists? But yeah I'd like to see some of that
WARREN- Omg what a cute Anyways I think I'd love to ship Sera and Warren if they got to interact like let's shove them two into a room rn please?? I actually though Kat would be cute with him but then Wake came along and so yeah that's the new otp yissss
KAT- A bit angsty but ok I'd like to get to know her a bit more and have more interactions and Wakey stuff but yeah.. Why'd they dissappear by the way? Idk waffle kinda died the past few days not sure why but it's time to start rping again
JERICHO- Fave character 100/10 would read again I love the awkwardness between him and Sera omg I'm not sure I want a relationship with them but I love the awkward hate/tolerance they have And he's super cool and involved with everyone and perfect AGGGG
RIO AND RIEN- see I even have to put them togethee they interact with no one else So umm yeah I don't pay a whole lot of attention to then really lol
SERA- Badass bamf aww yeah She kinda reminds me of Vriska Serket from Homestuck or Maggie from Avas demon and they're awesome female comic characters so I'm game for that She's really awesome but I really think that she should get more interaction in. I get her angst though so yeah
TILLY AND MILO- i d e k
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Post by Clever on Aug 19, 2013 20:59:04 GMT
Thank you for your input! We'll sure take your advice into suggestion! I don't believe that it's too harsh- (but yeesh...I got all the light critiques) and we'd like to hear more from you! Gosh, I love active guests, so I automatically love you in a non-wierd creeper way. Thanks for being the first one, and thanks for reading deep paranoia! Oh my gosh, I'm so flattered!
Yes, I have to say I enjoy Jericho as well. He gets all the evil out of me, I love his pessimistic, sadistic gestures of painful kindness. Sometimes, I gotta say, I accidentally let him out a little in public.
Warren, well I think he'd be a lot better if we tried to get all the characters together somehow, and bind the plots. I haven't got to bring him out that much, but I plan to.
Same with Rio.
And Karai.
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Post by Clever on Aug 19, 2013 21:07:39 GMT
~Users Online in the Last 24 Hours 2 Staff, 2 Members, 170 Guests.~
Speak up other 169 guests!
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Post by Nighty on Aug 20, 2013 20:59:44 GMT
heheh... 69...
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Post by diosma on Aug 20, 2013 22:10:26 GMT
Me: I realized that Lucy wasn't exactly working so well. I was planning on having her realize that it wasn't going to work between her and jäger and go back to the school with a personality... Just unsure exactly how to randomly have her become a different person...
And Wicked. Agreed, she needs to terrorize Warren. The thing is Warren is almost always with somebody and Wicked is more of a "pick-them-off-one-by-one" attacker.
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Post by Clever on Sept 19, 2013 16:10:43 GMT
WE HAVE A NEW COMMENT PUSHER!
First person to comment their favorite girl/boy couple gets to have that couple have a either awkward romantic or romantic moment! Any pairing as long as its a straight couple.
I haven't discussed this with the rest of our little role play cast so it may or may not happen. I dunno, what do you think guys?
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Post by Nighty on Sept 19, 2013 22:21:34 GMT
Karai and Clementine ftw!
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Post by idk on Sept 23, 2013 1:22:04 GMT
Ongomg Sera and Jericho are really cute Like in a creepy way b ut still don't judge I like the ship I was a little sad when Sera kinda had to take the form of Israel cause idunno that'd be weird for romance but I mean its a girl and a guy living together sheesh
Anyways Jericho's been manipulating her this whole time, I get that he's not one for romance at all but... idk I feel like he'd kind of try to see if another tactic works better??
In short: I just wanted stuff to happen and commented sORRY I DONT HAVE GOOD COMMENTARY
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Post by Fax on Oct 26, 2013 16:26:14 GMT
Clever and Waffle, I applaud you. Sera and Jericho's relationship is really great to follow- even though it isn't instant romance! That's what I love about them though. Sera is an ENFJ, and Jericho is an ISTJ, making them near polar opposites with enough in common to clash. A really interesting relationship to develop, and the way you guys shape it is through communication- not just instantly understanding each other like certain people do. In many rps, people read a characters reaction and base their post upon it- but sometimes that's godmodding, if a character doesn't show their thoughts! Sera and Jericho can take things the wrong way. They notice things that the author wants them to notice, and don't know what they shouldn't know. They learn from another by communication... I really love this. I know you guys have been nervous thay it'd be cliché for Sera to get with Jeri after Jäger and Luce, but I'll just tell you that their relationship would be awesome with romance- heck, even if they just became good friends! Sera is a big feeler, and her decisions are based on emotions, and Jericho is a calculating body, but they both get frustrated when the other doesn't understand and so they gradually learn how to think and feel. I'd just like to help encourage you in their character arcs, because the development is really flourishing. But remember, they need to CHANGE!
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Post by Clever on Oct 26, 2013 16:37:48 GMT
Guest, I applaud you.
Thank you. ^^ I love hearing that.
The funny thing is, Jericho was 'recreated' as a nightmare by Rien, who is kind of clueless about love. So in truth, Jericho's clueless aswell. I'm really enjoying how their two sides of a coin, Jericho being logic and Sera being emotion. I never believed in love at first sight being as enthralling as hate first love second. I just learned that there's a lot of relationships that are like that. When my mom first met my dad she thought he was an immature brat, and well, now they're married. XD
Thank you for your comment, it's very much appreciated.
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